

Exam. Close Reading. Final question. Poll.
#1
Posted 13 May 2005 - 12:59 PM
I said passage one; it talked about the implications, thus allowing me to dweel on them. The 2nd passage talked about how likely it was only.
#2
Posted 13 May 2005 - 01:21 PM
#3
Posted 13 May 2005 - 01:25 PM
Ahem
#4
Posted 13 May 2005 - 01:50 PM
Ahem
Haha, true - then again it WAS a tabloid....hehe.
#5
Posted 13 May 2005 - 01:53 PM
Lol yeah, mentioned that in my answer

Another good one was the question about trusting the professor guy - I was sooooo tempted to write that 'cause he was from Ireland I would find it difficult to take him seriously.
#6
Posted 13 May 2005 - 01:55 PM

#7
Posted 13 May 2005 - 02:02 PM
passage 1 i thot wos beter bt hey! its over now... we can breathe a sigh of relief!

#8
Posted 13 May 2005 - 02:03 PM
#9
Posted 13 May 2005 - 02:33 PM
If you chose Passage 1:
*Ideas were scientific and factual
*Short sentences focusing on the facts which make the situation scarily real etc
*Passage 2 more emotive and personal to the writer
If you chose Passage 2:
*language more informal
*more colloquial and therefore easier to relate to etc
#10
Posted 13 May 2005 - 02:41 PM
I keep looking back at the paper wondering if I've missed out a whole sheet or not *unsure*
#11
Posted 13 May 2005 - 02:42 PM

#12
Posted 13 May 2005 - 02:42 PM
#13
Posted 13 May 2005 - 02:43 PM
#14
Posted 13 May 2005 - 03:07 PM
#15
Posted 13 May 2005 - 03:28 PM
I said that the second one was more focused, concerning almost in its entirity the destruction of the earth because of the asteroid. It uses plenty of facts, which lends it a sense of credibility and also includes personal anecdote which also makes it seem more reliable.
I concluded by saying that passage two was best because it was most focused, howvere both had their strong points yadda yadda yadda.
#16
Posted 13 May 2005 - 03:31 PM
#17
Posted 13 May 2005 - 03:32 PM

#18
Posted 13 May 2005 - 03:38 PM
#19
Posted 13 May 2005 - 04:13 PM
That was the jist of it, although I wrote enough to make sure I got a full 5/4 marks, just basically picked apart the tabloid peice and said that passage one was just more credible and won, basically through lack of competition

#20
Posted 13 May 2005 - 09:25 PM
-it used other peoples opinions as well as the writers to back him up.
-He used the opinion of an MP which would add weight to the argument for some people since he was a man voted into the Govt. by people because he is trusted and honest(i dont believe it but it sounded good)
-Not as Naming comet makes it seem more real.
-same with date of impact makes it seem more real than the speculation in passage one
-then i added that the style of passage two was much more "reader friendly" and wasn't as downhearted and fact based and formal as the first passage
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